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Re: Leo
To answer the questions about the blue rectanguar thing. I attempted to draw a cellphone.(EPIC FAIL)
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: Leo
Leo Name: Leonardo Age:16 School: Attends Maydee Creek High Other details: Lycon (3 ) red eyes indicate just came out of transformaton/ or anger *Soon to come lycon Leo*
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: Secrets Drowned in Blood Chapter 1 Pt.2
Chapter 1 Pt.2 it is very very short i know. My next chapter should be up in a few days. Depends on my schedule. "We should get going." Noah threw ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
I agree with Master_Yoda, Ender's Game was ....awesome! But the best book I have ever read,well so far in my two years of actually reading, i would say..... Gone by ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: Secrets Drowned in Blood Chapter 1 Pt.1
I finally had time to edit,AGAIN, and post here is the 2nd final draft I have typed. Getting Him Back Chapter 1 part 1 "Hey, Julie, my mom said get ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: I'm gonna be alright
Wow I actually saw this playing in my mind! i love this sentence I'm gonna be.... ALRIGHT it was....a sudden burst of cofidence!! It was amazing! No better...... Miraculous!!!! yeah, ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Chilled to the core
No second thoughts now, her dream is now the truth. I did not understand that stanza,sentence,thing.(don't know about poems) That was the only thing that bothered me. It is a ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Hell
The sins have thier fun with your soul,mind,and consious, but soon enough they bring you down to Hell. No chance of saying good to the blissful light. Every step you ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Hidden (Preview)
WOW!! great! a lot of imagery. (my english teacher would totally give you an A+ for the semester, she would also cry because of the great awesome usage of imagery.) ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: Prophecy - Prologue
Some trees lay ahead, safety? To me it doesn't make sense,try a diffrent puncutation. there were a couple more mistakes, but they were pointed out above. I really enjoyed it. ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: The Dagger of Truth (Chapter 1 part Two)
Didn’t I tell you to can it?” Silence. That was never good. Either it meant I was going to have to go soul collecting steamed, or Reaper wanted me to ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: Mac
AWWW!!!!! for some strange reason your kitty gave me the energy to do my homework.....i guess her/his cuteness filled up my heart!!! anyways, she/he is soooooo cute.....no.....adorable....how old is h
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: Secrets Drowned in Blood: Prolouge
yes it is very short, but that is the point! Prolouge Screams echoed behind him. The sounds of glass breaking, wood cracking, and even his footsteps filled the air. He ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Winged Character 1 of 3
A few things though: if you did not draw the pictures and/or did not draw the text or make sure the text is open domain, you cannot sell this. However, ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Winged Character 1 of 3
IF it doesnt show I am sorry I am new, and will you mind helping me out!? Alec Danson
Aug 20, 2011
