Aristotle

this is great

Hiya Aristotle, PenNPaper here :D I would like to say that I liked your story, your style of writing. However, I really wanted to read more. Even for a prologue, ...

Look it up in The Bible. *Hint Hint*

It was a sunny day in late spring. The park that would one day be called Discovery National Park was empty. I looked at Chris, and then at Chrissie. They ...

The issue you have here is that it's very, very cliched. It's a typical love song about someone leaving the person who is singing. I would try to make this ...

Why Did You Have to Go? Once you left, Twice you broke my heart. You tried to stay, But that just made it worse. I think I’m gonna lose my ...

sure. I'll have the next post up by Wednesday, and I'll pm you when i post it. Also, what trans neural transmogrification is will be reveal in part 2 Ages ...

Part One: Childhood (Years 5-9) Chapter One (May 8th - 11 years before The Mockingjay Incident) I wake up inside of my underground bedroom, and remember that it’s my birthday. ...

The comment was just a comment... Not part of the story.

A moment of silence for Thresh... A moment of silence for Rue... A moment of silence for Glimmer... A moment of silence for Foxface... A moment of silence for Marvel... ...

Oh man, I meant to use him! I don't know why I wrote Thresh! I'll make changes.

Wow. It was kind of hard to read because of the lack of starting a new paragraph every time someone speaks, but i like the theme! Keep writing, Aristotle (a ...

Prologue / Chapter 0 May 9th - 16 years before The Mockingjay Incident “We’re going to have to make this quick!” said Haymitch, silently entering the Everdeen home. “Okay, We’ll ...

Hi. My name's Ari, and I'll be your reviewer today. This is a pretty crazy song, but it makes perfect sense when i sing it in my head. Nice Work! ...

I've never seen a piece of literature set out like this before, quite unusual but quite interesting too ^^ I have to make a connection here between three and your ...