Ardor

This is beautiful! This is an excellent poem, which lives up to it's name. It is, to me, a poem chronicling the effects of lust on the individual, and you ...

I pledge allegiance to the flag Of the United states of White America America- the land of the free America- the land of the pigs who bleed America- the home ...

Awesome flow you got going on. You have very original ideas. I can understand this poem very well. In fact I have Aspergers Syndrome. In short, I often feel like ...

I already have her hayley10019. I wrote this two years ago.

I just love the simplicity of the last line. Overall you have quite a gem for a poem. I love tha flow of the piece, and how not every line ...

Well that's really nice. There's nothing quite like expressing your love for someone in a poem. You have used a lot of metaphors and very special moments where you make ...

I kneel and wait in silence I stare into the people's eyes Slipping away they give me a smile Buried alive with their graphic lies I have forseen all primary ...

Thank you for the honest post Calligraphy. Obviously this won't appeal to everyone, but I do notice you are write: this guy rambles. And his doesn't shut the hell up. ...

This is a good entry for the contest, though you have missed out one word out, but really that's for picky people. It was good for a fantasy. All the ...

I agree, the ending is missing some sot of relief maybe, something to sign off with. But it doesn't matter! You are a very talented person. This wouldn't be good ...

Writer's block? I never would have guessed. This is very creative- chapter 2 is gonna be great I can feel it. It is an interesting concept, although the opening 12 ...

Oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes. This is awesome. You ...

I am English too. Yay! Anyway, this is a good start. It does everything a prologue should: introduces whatever is going on, builds up tthe first few chapters and has ...

3. The “meeting” The soft brown chair is so uncomfortable that I can barely realise I am sitting in an actual hall. The meetings held here have no message at ...

*crickets chirping*