Ardor

THAT WAS KUWL. Sorry for my spelling, I was experimenting. I hope that you are able to finish this novel. I am appalled by teh fact this has no reviews ...

Well that was...great. It had a really nice flow with plenty of action. You are clearly an expert in setting up a scene. You seem to understand these characters. You ...

Very good. Although I preferred the first part, I still think this is a good chapter. It still has that idea of feeling like an outsider which I loved about ...

Yesterday was the first time I listened to the Manic Street Preachers in two years. Don't get me wrong, to those MSP fans, it must be a crime. But not ...

Such a sweet, melodic poetry. The words flow elegantly and beautifully. I love the way you have used metaphors throughout. You seem to put a lot of emotion within your ...

Welcome Amber. I am 567ajt, lord of ambiguous poetry and messed up narratives. I hope to see great things from you. Welcome to YWS. If you need anything, just post ...

By the way you made a typo error ("everythinmg"). In terms of language it is great, but I don't really see much flow. I feel that some of the lines ...

Although it is in the General Articles section, I think it has good potential to actually be a semi-autobiographical novel. I don't know why, but the way it is written ...

Hi there Burma! Welcome to YWS. I am 567ajt, lord of ambiguous poetry and master of abstract narrative. I hope to see great things from you :) If you need ...

Thank you for your very honest comments. I wrote this pretty much as a contest entry. It is for the Creative Anything contest, where I can make it as realistic ...

Garden of words and flowers of blood The other words to describe our love Into the trees and buried in my head Life can never surpass the reality Of ever ...

I'm a Fender guy myself. Although I have an Epiphone Dot, my favourite has and always will be my Fender Jazzmaster.

I think that it's up to the woman's choice, as clean and as simple as that. Nothing else matter. Exactly. I agree with this post 100%.

I agree with the original post so much. And I am not saying this because I am atheist. I am, in fact, an Agnostic. In my eyes, religion is open ...

Faith- the definition of infinity Garden- don't know why, but it sounds so beautiful