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Re: Then Came the Fall.
Yeah I personally thought what the policeman said was a tad bit unrealistic, but I loved your use of dialogue. I am also a big fan of your style. You ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Demon of the sea:Chapter 3
No, you're it! :) Just joking. Anyway, I thought it was great. I like how you developed your characters- at first I found Valarie a bit confusing- throughout your novel. ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Juste Moi
I really like this. You must have a very colourful personality. Yeah, the rhyming was a bit off, but it doesn't really matter. If you are writing about yourself then ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Regarding My Insanity . . .
This was creepy. I liked the way you built the tension up until the last paragraph. Structure's good, you have a way of describing certain characters which I love. For ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: When the World Throws Sh*t at You
I admire your honesty. This is a very, very personal piece. A lot of people can relate to this on such a level that they can hold it to their ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Richey Edwards
Anytime mparq :) The Holy Bible is so badass isn't it?
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Circles
Aww this is really nice. Exuse the 'Aww', I'm a guy with feelings :) Great poem. I would suggest you expand it, it has great potential to be an extended ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: A Warm Welcome To All
Hi there :) I just wanted to know if anyone listens to Joy Division on the site.
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Hello(:
Out of curiosity what is insomnia like?
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Hello(:
Well, I'm sorry to hear you are an insomniac. It's a very interesting subject. Regardless, you sound like you're going to exceed my standards of new writers. Welcome to YWS! ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: (I Really Should Think Of A Title) - Whole of Chapter 1
I thought it was too long. I found the first couple paragraphs lacking the pace you would expect in a first chapter. I feel that at the end the pace ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Lifeless Friends
*two hour standing ovation* Wow. Just wow. Wow. Just wow. Wow. Just wow. Wow. Just wow. Wow. Just wow. Wow. Just wow. Wow. Just wow. I'm just going to do ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: "No Longer Online"
PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!LET THEM GET BACK TOGETHER!PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!LET THEM GET BACK TOGETHER!PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!LET THEM GET BACK TOGETHER!PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: "No Longer Online"
Hmm. Interesting. Very interesting. I'm not so fond on the title, personally speaking. I don't think it fits the style of writing. It seems too cliched in my honest opinion. ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Favorite Bands? Or songs?
Manic Street Preachers- favourite song= Faster Joy Division- favourite song= Insight Echo & The Bunnymen- favourite song= Over The Wall Pixies- favourite song= Bone Machine Nirvana- favourite song= Se
Aug 1, 2011