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Re: What are you listening to at the moment? [2]
The whole Pornography album by The Cure. Awesome stuff!
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: Just The Five Of Us
Don't worry- it's posted now
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: Just The Five Of Us
This was a script I wrote 3 years ago. It is flawed in places and fairly short, so don't expect anything up to the standard you expect from me. This ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: Here We Go *Edited*
I think this is really nice. I also loved how you structure your poem. This gives a whole lot of meaning into your words. I especially love the language. It ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: Over The Wall
The man in the back has a question His tongue is involved with solutions But the monkey on my back He just won't stop laughing Over the wall Hand in ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [7]
Banned for looking like a pink ninja XD
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: Hi from new writer Lima Ojima
Hey there Lima :) Welcome to YWS! I am 567ajt, lord of ambigous poetry and master of really confusing narratives XD How are you? If you need anything just post ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: The Garden
I haven't added a flow because when I wrote it I couldn't think straight. I wrote this while I was in Ireland for my Grandad's funeral, therefore this poem paints ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: F*** you
Actually I'll take back my last comment. So, this was...a rant? I must've misread. I thought this was going to be something in the style of something. But this is...a ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: F*** you
Whoa. That was something. A lot of the 'f' bombs eh? Every paragraph had at least 2 uses of the word. I really liked it. It had a nice, tight ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Proxy pt. 3 (final part)
sliver What a snake. What a rat. What an absolute bigot. There he comes, criminal record on his tongue, bragging about it to the ladies. As you can tell, it ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: The Official Goodbye/Departure Thread
I am to be admitted to a mental hospital in Scotland, with no rain or YWS or even someone to laugh with. My girlfriend is worried about me. Even worse ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]
7/10 A bit obvious but whatever.
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: The Nation's Slaughterhouse preface
Preface Dinner would’ve been served hours ago if it wasn’t for the deepest of conversations. The wine is getting more bitter, as we proceed to laugh and joke about the ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: The Next Two Months...
Ok, I've only just came back from Ireland, after an endless week comforting my mum and watching someone in a coffin who was soon to be cremated. 7 days I ...
Aug 19, 2011
