Ardor

the words of William Burroughs, "pay it all pay it all pay it all back". I think this is ok, but it kind of tells us about how lost this ...

Sugar nuts.

Thank you for the review :) Take note that during the writing of this poem, I wasn't your most happiest person, so I really had no plan in my head ...

Banned for being a penguin.

So I woke up today And had the worst feeling My nails are filthy My eyes are splitting So tonight will be the night And the heart will be the ...

Preserve my arrows Preserve the memory I'm drowning too soon I'm not fit to go on I can't talk to you I cannot touch you Two months in limbo When ...

I didn't really feel that the repetition of 'I'll never die' was needed for the last line, but overall a solid poem. You have put great effort into this, if ...

This was...interesting. It was like having epilepsy, and flashing lights of random would blare in your eyes randomly. I also died laughing during your story. It was not as you ...

I love this! It is great! Each line has it's own distinctive importance which I love, and your use of flow is really quite lovely so I can read the ...

Great poem! It has a nice simplicity to it I think. I also liked how you made the two stanzas link in rhyme. My only suggestion is the same thing ...

10/10 CLASSIC!

Persistence is the ultimate barrier For the arguments of one's sacred law To give you my own reflection To show the immovable flaw Protection of another's kisses So father is ...

A kiss on the cheek A faithful reawakening All the happy faces To get me out of sight Red eyes to glare And a soul mate to kill A silent ...

Yes.

Oh goody! Yet another spellbinding chapter from you! I think each of your chapters focuses on a specific aspect. In this aspect, I love how you have mainly focused on ...