Ardor

Neo-Guinea-piggy

So schizophrenic The idea is burnt The time is now stretching A crash back to Earth I will listen to you now I will give you something Have some water ...

I live with fred; he is my brother.

This was really nice. Admittably, I'm not so much of a fan of stuff about angels, but this was really nice. I liked how you mentioned the deer in one ...

CelticaNoir- For being awesome Lumi- For providing me with a hugely negative review Demoness- For giving my 5/5 on one of my poems Nate- For running this wonderful site for ...

The idea is....interesting. However, I don't think it is very necessary. This narrator I find a bit grumpy and miderable- it kind of spoils the read if this narrator is ...

1. Whatever happened to my life? Before you ask, I’m not for sale you fucking jerk. Before you slap me, call me a whore, argue with me over the price ...

NURSE: Doctor, doctor! The invisible man's here to see you! DOCTOR: Well tell him I can't see him right now.

I have high expectations of a lot of writers.. You are one of those writers. After reading a lot of your work, I always expect an amazing follow up. I ...

I like the idea, but I'm a bit surprised you have dived in already. I think prologues should serve as an introduction, like introducing the current state of time. Already ...

Gee, you forgot to tell me about this poem. It is absolutely astonishing. I can't believe it took me almost two months to read this. I literally stumbled on it ...

I liked this. It had an interesting concept to it that I loved. I seemed to get under the impression that this character was depressed about who they were, whether ...

This isn't a condition This is more like a curse Strobe lights that persist Voices that scream A light that sends me away Those images that swirl Particular visions of ...

Whoa.

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