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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Just a reflection away..

    Hey! I wil be your reviewer. First things first: As the storm calms down and leaves, A fear starts to awaken in you.. Once again... all over again. Why give ...

    Nov 7, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: A Suicide Note

    ...Whoa. Just wow. That was brilliant. I loved it. Speechless. Just...speechless. You have opened my heart.

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Conversation of Cats

    Heeheeheehee. This unleashes the child in me for sure! I

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: The singing game

    I did, until She Lost Control (Joy Division) Where do I start?

    Nov 5, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: The Baby Burns

    Oh foetus Your fingers so delicate You will never know your father What is your agenda? Born out of one mother's lie And at your birth he will not show ...

    Nov 5, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]

    Granted, but once you change something, it can't go back. I wish I could have a conversation with Ian Curtis.

    Nov 5, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Cuts.

    Love love love it!!!! What more is there to say?!

    Nov 5, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: What do you hate?

    Commercial music.

    Nov 5, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: What is the first word you think of when I say...........

    Unknown Pleasures.

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately

    Fortunately, I farted, which stopped the whole countdown clock of doom.

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Temptation

    I tried hard not to touch I promised to myself Her heart was not guarded Couldn't redeem myself Stabbed you deep in the back To see your reaction Your heart ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Don't You Let It Die, Jane

    I didn't realise it was about abortion until I opened the spoiler. Now I do. Whoa. Oh man. OH MAN OH MAN OH MAN! This is what happens when you ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: That Special Week

    This was personal to say the least. I did find this fairly graphic. I am a guy, so I definetely don't have periods. You have managed to do what few ...

    Nov 3, 2011
  • Other Re: Vengeance

    First of all, welcome to YWS. Second of all, great preface! Sure, it may need a bit more detail and a tiny bit longer, but you already seem to be ...

    Nov 3, 2011
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Do you think that the world will have 1 state?

    It is possible, but I wouldn't bet all of my money on it. In order for the whole world to have one state, that means all of the bad stuff ...

    Nov 3, 2011


Surround yourself with people who are serious about being writers, and who will tell you, ‘Hey—you can do better than this.’ Who will be critical of your work, but also supportive. And who will not be competitive in a negative way.
— Isabel Quintero