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Lyric Poetry Re: No Cure

There is no cure to force. They'll always be a place. When our dreams snap in two, All of our hopes are shattered. Cure...for the love; It means everything. Cure...for ...

Nov 16, 2011

Action/Adventure Novels Re: David Echoe Chapter 1

Hmm...interesting. Nice idea having your username as the main character. Did it pay off? Well, to be honest with you, yes and no. It had an air of adventure and ...

Nov 16, 2011

Lyrics Re: Her Parents Are Xenophobes And She Knows It

Their tradition with layers of racism Picking on me because I am not like them Going as far as to send you away Hoping we never re-meet another day I'm ...

Nov 15, 2011

General Fiction Short Stories Re: Unspoken

This is good, but I feel you might need to flesh it out longer. It seems, to be honest with you, really rushed. We're just given reasons why you killed ...

Nov 15, 2011

Randomosity Archive Re: What is the first word you think of when I say...........

Rebecca Black- Friday

Nov 13, 2011

Randomosity Re: Free Hugs!

*sombre hug*

Nov 13, 2011

Official Polls Re: What genres do you write in?

OTHER: I'm a little confused on how to classify my writing. What genre welcomes isolation/alienation/death/bipolar/suicide/self-harming? Definetely not Romance that's for sure!

Nov 13, 2011

Lyric Poetry Re: Remembrance Day

R emember them E veryone one of them M ore every day as I write E mboddied in our tears M any more will pay the price B ravery on ...

Nov 11, 2011

Narrative Poetry Re: Green Flowers

A pregnant void. Speechless.

Nov 10, 2011

Lyric Poetry Re: Change Of Mood....Change Of Thoughts

You should smile way more often It gets me on such a high Flash forward to the morning And I wish I want to die My brain in all directions ...

Nov 10, 2011

Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]

10/10. REBEL!!!!