Ardor

Pinkerton

Oh yes indeed. TUBM hates alternative rock.

Daydream Nation.

All this expectation All paths to my own cell A pleasure that always shakes The very core of my heart You are too good for me You don't deserve a ...

Sounds interesting....but what does Incendium mean? I know it is made up, but could you explain the meaning in a PM for me? The poem is very layered and realistic. ...

9/10. Love it!!!

Very long. Very epic though. I liked your rhetorical questions at the end, gave the piece some empthasis. I also LOVED your structure. It was you telling your story. I ...

Talking Heads- Thank You for Sending Me An Angel

KuKristineanianelian Pre-Skuwl Pretti. Ugggghhhhh

So we can't name drop a movie, like, ever? Mention music? You know, socialise? God this Political Correctness shtick is really getting on my nerves. I live in the UK. ...

Hi Lizzie! :) Welcome to YWS, one of the best websites of ALL time. I am 567ajt, lord of ambiguous poetry and novels that make no sense. You will love ...

Has a nice little twist to it which I like. I think this is really good. I am not so fond of the cat though- I think you could develop ...

Well you're a poopiehead.

I really liked this. It had a nice feel to it. I liked how you extended the lines. It gave it a real endless, decadent feel. It felt like the ...

Very motivational. Has a nice feel to it, like a political speech, or a speech by someone on the eve of battle. It also had a nice, consistent flow which ...