Archstormangel

Also, Obama's not for gay marriage. :/ Neither of the candidates were. I supported McCain, but hey, at least Obama's patriotic (note Victory speech).

Killing a killer reminds of what Martin Luther King said: "An eye for an eye leaves everybody blind." Actually, I believe that was Gandhi. Just wanted to point that out. ...

I hate Twilight. I could rant all day about Twilight. But I won't. I'll just say that Harry Potter's rounded, 3D characters, amazing character development, detailed description of a wholly ...

Lots of practice, paper, and...um..... time.

LOL, thanks Sam. Yeah, considering I'm a twin, I figured I might as well stick a pair in their 8D xD

So did I. Now I'm thinking, is this about incest? It sounds like it, that's the message it's conveying. It's not very clear, it's a bit cliche, and the layout ...

Thanks, both of you! I'd rather keep it as get out get out get out, because I like to avoid using exclamation points, and I think it displays the fear ...

Ah, thanks so much! I'll fix those. And thanks for the encouragement, I'll rub that in his face (j/k). c For the 'She squeezed them shut' line - I didn't ...

Okay, first, I'd like to express a very quick rant: When my friend read this, he was all 'But it's not a poem, it's a story! That's not a poem!' ...

What i'm astounded by is how people seem to truly hate Palin, for no really justifiable reason. There's disliking her views and strongly opposing her, but what I get from ...

I actually really liked this one. It was funny, and light. Nice writing, good flow, good story-telling. Great job, I'd love to read some more. Almost makes me wish for ...

The right foot looks as though it bends in at the middle. Ouch. It's also quote a bit bigger, but that is actually physically possible so I won't call you ...

Take some anatomy classes. c: It'd help tons. And draw with a thinner pencil.

Yeah, I figured I was too vague. It was a school assignment and my teacher told me to keep it 35 lines so I had to cram. I'll fix it ...

Thank you, Amber. Yeah, I'm waaayy too lazy. :P And I suck at drawing hands. I need to work on that. >.