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Matt Denzer In second period, Sky Malone was doing anything but paying attention. This was a simple class – philosophy – and after listening to some opinions on life in ...

I love you oh god that was such an amazing critique you are my favorite person ever you took the type to print , edit and scan oh god. I ...

IQ tests are designed for mathmatically/scientifically minded people. They don't really measure 'intellegence' as it is a multi-faceted concept. ...um.. no. IQ tests CAN measure intelligence, but you'

I was complaining about that recently. I wouldn't take ti that far, but girl's pants needs bigger pockets is all I'm saying. I think it's like that because girl clothes ...

I had to fit all the events into three pages; thus, the lack of description. I didn't think I needed it that bad, though. xD I'll definitely add some more, ...

This is the first three pages of a story for Creative Writing - we're starting fiction now. PLEASE R&R! The chalk made a horrendous, screeching noise as the teacher dragged ...

Her hips are too small compared to her shoulders and bust. If her shoulders are that wide, then yes, her bust is that big. But if her shoulders are that ...

I tried to interview the Chicken, but it said only this: "I have a dream that one day, Chickes will be able to cross the road without having their motives ...

Spiderman, Spiderman, your friendly neighborhood Spiderman....

Stop stating religious beliefs like they are definite facts. Anywho. No. There are SO many people who, like me, have trouble reading things that are not in paper, in my ...

Just lock them away from society. No inhumanity HAS to be involved, but make it uncomfortable and boring and dull, day in and day out, with angry people (other criminals) ...

I love how no one commented on how I used words to set a specific tone. D: Whatever. XD

Too vague, I'm thinking. You didn't really paint a picture. 'A dark vortex of pain' - well, what does pain feel like? Use metaphors to your advantage. It probably needs ...

No. Those predictions are too vague. If I say 'I predict in 1000 years, there will be great, large, dangerous objects that soar through the skies', and in 500 years, ...

It depends on the crime and how long the sentence would be.