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Aiden magically appears *Blinks at Leo* What did you do? -Aiden *Mumbles, and points at his mouth* -Leo Oh... Sorry about them, they're orphans. You'll understand... -Aiden *Growls* I'ma goifin ...

Hmm... Makes me think of someone who doesn't think much of himself, and about his story in life. Or something. It was a bad bad guess... Ha, this one'll have ...

...Well spotted. Seems our author can't type... -Leo Belligerant... are we just going to ignore that comment? -Archae I guess so... -Leo So I don't have to learn what that ...

Hmm... May I make one, simple, perfectly normal suggestion? Paragraphs my friend! And thus, I am done... :roll: Arch xxx

So, here's chapter one of my story so far. Critisism = Love! ^_^ Chapter 1 The human mind is so fragile. The simplest of things can shatter it; break it ...

Sometimes I create a character just because I need someone to die! But, even then, I get attached to them and don't want them to die... there's no escaping the ...

My favorite book? God, that's a hard one to answer... I'd have to say Nightrise by Anthony Horowitz, because I just loved the plot. My favorite author too :lol: I'm ...

Yay! More Brits! Soon... we'll take over the world! HA! :twisted: Aaanway, welcome to YWS... *Stares suspiciously at those nearby* Arch xxx

Leo and Archae somehow, magically appear in the conversation Someone actually invented you? What were they thinking? -Archae *Punchs Archae* Shutup! -Leo What? Seriously, if we spoke about our writer ...

Wait...what? -Archae ...Say again, I don't get it -Leo Not sure... give me a moment, I'll think about it! -Aiden What do you do for fun?

"That's a stupid question. Shut-up. Go away." -Archae "I don't know... I just see... red, I guess..." -Leo "Something nasty." -Aiden What do you regret most in life?

Huh... cool stuff I have a character who is going to get killed in my later chapters. Thing is, though, he doesn't dramatically dive in front of anybody to take ...

Wow... that was pretty deep stuff! It felt like one, huge metaphor (Not the right word, but I can't think of another one...) or something. I can only think of ...

Well that was interesting. Reminded me of Dragonheart... I have no idea why. :? Funky plot! So anyway, the story was well written enough, couple of grammer mistakes here and ...

I can't be the only person who feels this... There's always a time, for me, when one of the more important or iconic characters in my stories has to die. ...