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Thank you for the review! Weird...I normally try to look over my chapters for typos, but thanks for pointing them out! Oh! The italicize thing makes sense! I will try ...

Thank you for your review! I don't think I really chose to use "heavy dialogue". Maybe it just happened. I can't seem to get right the dialogue between Asenath and ...

In Word I have a little emblem thingy to separate the two sections, but it doesn't copy to this website for some reason. I am so happy that you read ...

Thank you Cricket! *Ding, ding!* You are correct! Yes, this is based on the book of Genesis, and yes, it was an arranged marriage. You win...self-satisfaction! it probably should be ...

Haha Thank you so much! I've been looking forward to this review!

Thank you unknownwithlotsofnumbers! The genre thing was a little difficult to pick at first so I'm glad I did it right!

That's fine! Don't feel rushed!

Chapters 15 and 16 are up! Whenever you got time!

Haha, it's fine! I hadn't even heard of Asenath before I started this book so I can definitely look over a tiny mistake :)

Thank you for your review! "My lord" is actually a term of respect used in many ancient cultures. See 1 Peter 3:6. yes, I got it from the Chronicles of ...

Thank you so much! All of your comments were so helpful! I have Chapter 15 up too, and ,if u want, I can put up the next chapter today.

Haha sorry but I can be frank sometimes...

Thanks for responding. Good luck with the move :) And I read your other chapters and will review sometime. It's sooo hard to wait for the next chapter. I wanna ...

Haha that's ok!

Thanks for the follow! This is Chapter 15 so you missed some of the best chapters so far! Anything I could work on? All that stuff I already wrote, so ...