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Re: Chasing Sunsets
Loved it and dont even have to picture it I can see it hahaha I know the feeling though when you have an amazing picture like that even a second ...
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Re: Absurdity
WHY CANT I WRITE LIKE THAT? lol hahaha jealousy is also a form of flattery...It's a really good piece of work make me laugh and think in a way it ...
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Re: Despair
Feels like high school all over again! lol demo I think its pretty great how you captured the essence of despair. I want to say you shouldn't see yourself as ...
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Re: Missing You
I think its good but it has the potential to be great! Your poem feels like its unfinished as if the story isn't done. Anyhow you can do it! Good ...
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Re: What are you?
WOW hhahaha havnt been touched by a poem like that in a while...amazing read!
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Re: Midnight
Planned on rescuing you Whisking you away To a place we could forever stay Yet I hesitate Watching you from shadows afar Wanting you with all my heart I ache ...
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Re: Dark
I may be not be alone Still I feel as if not a soul cares Or much less looks my way “Close your eyes” I hear “You have nothing to ...
Nov 10, 2008
