Arashi

Very nice and WELCOME to our little corner of the universe :)

I agree some things should remain a mystery always keep em guessing! lol your first poem? where have you been? haha jk You should keep on writing because its obvious ...

WELCOME! lol nice poem had a good flow nice way to start it of I like the last kiss bit!

Simply beautiful in its utmost original form! "Places them face to face And in that moment, they have harnessed the fates' Very well done I especially liked how you added ...

It feels very Van Gogh to me thats a compliment haha I meant in a good way. Your poem is haunting piece of work but also beautiful. Nice job keep ...

WOW your 13? definitely you have a great way with words. I liked your poem it was different. Mostly when something like that happens you hate the girl..you projected your ...

Flames are very much appreciated! Thank you.

She wakes up late at night her vivid green eyes filled with lies memories that just wont die her lips tremble the same old story you know you wont be ...

I could kiss you hahaha its nice to be appreciated lol

I think its an amazing poem you get right to the point. The last few lines could use some work to do the poem the justice it deserves otherwise great ...

Consumed is a wonderful poem I like how it doesnt scream me, me, me rather you say it without saying it. Now I'm sure theres a word for that lol ...

Great poem could use some work other than that great storyline. Keep it up!

It was very hero/salvation type of poem nice read. It has sort of a mythological feel to it. It was great, "But in the carnal quest for fulfillment They lost ...

Its lacking something that I cant quite put my finger on any suggestions? Much thanks Arashi

Seems like just about every other day she's breaking down nowhere to be found pushed up against the wall slowly losing it all she wonder's what else is there left ...