Araidne

Thanks! I just finished typing it up! Thank you for all your help! :D

Well, for Latin prayers, I would try a Catholic Chruch.

I think that the media should have stricter guidelines of what is important, and what is not.

Ok. I must say, you had me wincing in my chair when I read that post. :)

I support the death penalty, because there are sick people who get a "high" from killing others. Are those people productive members of society? I think not.

Really? I have always wanted to learn Gaelic. How/where is she leaning it?

Oh , and if you are reading this, the poem is in a Celtic style. :P

Thanks! I will edit. I do appreciate tips on how to improve my writing! :D

The moon is full, the stars are out, with sand beneath my feet. I feel the wind its breezes sweet. Mist surrounding all I know, for into the unknown I ...

Gal, are you sure it didn't? Just thinking about that hurts.!

I disagree. If a family member of yours was murdered, would you want their killer dead, or alive? I vote for dead.

I am whole. The guiding palm of the Ultimate Reality has unclenched my hesitant eyes and released me into a world of pure clarity. The warmth of It's knowledge resonates ...

Nice! :D On one line though, "the champagne fades", I would tweak it a bit. Just a bit. Second stanza: LOVED IT! It has a nice even flow,(unlike mine) Ending: ...

I'd drop the part with the war. To me , that makes it to Harry Potterish. Otherwise,it is AOK :wink:

On your lioness, I would draw her so that she is in a crouch/stalk posistion. :D