ArahniaSiddel

Michel It was awkward sitting there while Blake and Elie talked. I wished I had my music. "I'm through lying," Blake said "They'll all probably hate me, but they deserve ...

Hey, this is great. In the bottom right hand corner there is something blurry (a stick?) it distracts me. I also think that it would look a lot better if ...

I love this. I think that it is great in the middle, because I totally focus. Could you make it bigger though. . . A. S.

Michel I sighed. I needed to sleep not find a place to hide, but I stood back up. My legs shook. I was exhausted. That’s when I realized I hadn't ...

Shadow~ I walked and walked, when I was full stuffed the rest of the bread in my bag. Now I was almost to the outskirts. There was an old bus. ...

February I sprinted through the trees forcing myself to go faster. Even though speed was one of my strong suites there is always room for improvement. My light breakfast soon ...

Shadow My stomach grumbled. I watched the sleeping bodies waiting for one to move, but they didn’t seem to notice. I slipped into the small kitchen and started to open ...

Thank you for all the help! I know grammar isn't my strong suite. :? :D I made some changes. A. S.

I am sooo sorry I forgot that they had to have had an apprentice :( umm I will fix that. .. As far as I know the deputy sleeps in ...

Will someone bring me in. I was gone for a few days and bam I have no idea what is going on. I read the posts... but... I don't want ...

Michel My lungs fought for air, and my eyes stung. I clenched Ester’s arm. We wouldn’t be able to find them if we were drowning ourselves. My mind desperately wanted ...

Hey, I love the one you uploaded. :) I can't do art so I don't really have any advice. I just noticed that some of the eyebrows were above the ...

1. Great but in the bottom right hand corner I can see the car. That distracts me. :( 2. I really can't comment on this because I don't think it ...

Thankyou for the help. I don't mind people that point out the bad stuff! I hate people who say its good. :) A. S.

I guess sunstarfrozenlifem isn’t going to post so I will. Can someone list who's left or I guess I could try to figure it out... KK or Carissa- Two more ...