-
Re: Project L.I.F.E
Carissa "KK" I told Randolyn. Did he really expect me to tell him his real name? He was about to say something when a boy started to go on about ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Hypotheses
First, I don't know anything about poems. I just pretend like I do :D Anyway I read this poem 3 times, and I think it is really good. It doesn't ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Twisted
Hi, you are going to love this sight. As long as you don’t mind nitpicks that is. I agree with Biffle1 you are very talented. But, I also agree with ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: My Doodlebug
This is a great poem an very emotional. I am really sorry about your horse. I don't think you should change anything majior.I liked the ryhmes some of them just ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Three Rainbows Dancing In The Sky . . .
Thank You for all the help :) I am not going to rewrite it, but I will keep all this in mind for the future.
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Project L.I.F.E
You guys said I could still start. But, this is a few days later so If I shouldn't be just tell me. O.k I hope I am doing this right ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: How To Keep a Storybook Moving
I hate when storybook titles say "new characters please" when there is 101 posts and they are not still accepting. I am not sure if there is a way to ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Aboard the Petrel
Gender: Male Age: He is not sure, but around 15 Appearance: He whears a leather jacket at all times and an old pair of boots. Plus the same cut - ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Warriors: (like the books)
Name:Cloudwhiskers Gender: male Role: Medicine cat Clan: BushClan Personality: Always acts angry, but he is really wise. keeps to himself Appearance: Wildstar.jpg Family: Was a rogue, but when he was ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Project L.I.F.E
can I still start?
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Warriors: (like the books)
Dragonet,you could make some more cats ... . . Also providing a picture would be good. I also have some questions. Where do the medicine cats meet? Where do the ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Warriors: (like the books)
Name: featherkit Gender: girl Role: kit Clan: Bushclan Personality: she thinks the best of everyone. She is really hard on herself though, and never thinks she can do anything right. ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Warriors: (like the books)
Name: Cinderstar - I claim to be the leader of Bush Clan Gender:Female Role: Leader of Bush Clan Clan: Bush Clan Personality: I am kind. I know what is going ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Nine Eleven revised
I love this poem. I woudn't change anything, but take out the first line. I don't really think it goes with the rest of the stanza. Besides that it is ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Honeydrops Ahoy!
Honeydrops Ahoy! The sky above is blue, A deep-sea blue, The bluest blue That had ever been blue. here "had" should be has. I think The clouds are white, But ...
May 5, 2010
