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Saul Why am I always stuck with work? He thought. From the moment the sails had been unfurled he had been ordered about. He barely had time to eat his ...

Andrew Andrew crept down the stairs trying to be silent. But, he kicked a fire bucket. It crashed into the stairs. Sand flew everywhere. He cursed to himself, and scrambled ...

Poems are as peaceful as the swaying of a tree And as violent as the churning sea They describe everything From snow melting when it hits a lake To a ...

The sun creeps back into hiding, disappearing behind the trees. Seaweed sways below me, where the sacred water flows. The steely white moon shines from behind the clouds As I ...

ummmmmm . . . . I can't really comment on the poem. But, what you said before the poem was awful. Please use complete words. :) Thankyou A. S.

I agree, the first line should go. I also think the second to last line should go. Transforming all the old to new. I don't really know why I would, ...

This poem is short. Add more details. I am not exactly sure what is going on so I can't help more. A. S.

Lizbeth Lizbeth checked out the bathrooms. They were nice enough even had plug-ins for blow-dryers and everything else she had stuffed into her bag. Lizbeth was almost back up to ...

Michel As we flew I slowly fell behind. I had the more wounds than any of the others. I saw something below me. A Wolf?! No, it was a girl. ...

Daydreams/everyone . . .. .. I will not be posting because people in this storybook (aside from a few)don't work together at all. Some of you post once and a ...

Mudkit Mudkit pounced on a green leaf but, looked up as Cinderstar jumped up on the Highrock. “Let all those cats old enough to catch their own prey join here ...

Michel and a few others flew down to the nearest trees. They each began sizing up their own pieces and cutting them off. Once they each had a big bundle ...

Lizzy They burst out of the trees, six wild boars. I froze in panic. Sara ran towards them and Vicki brandishing a flaming stick. The fire made them retreat, but ...

Michel Michel and Ester had fallen into silence. Blake walked over and sat next to Ester. She seemed lost in her thoughts so Michel didn’t say anything. After a few ...

Saul - Ship's boy. Sweat poured down Saul’s back. It ran in his eyes and made them sting. The little adventure he had been looking forward too was completely gone. ...