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Re: Winged Ones
Sorry I haven't posted. If I get any facts wrong please let me know! My internet wasn't working :( Michel I started to walk. I had trained more sence the ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Aboard the Petrel
Andrew Sweat poured off the surgeon and everyone else in the room. It smelled of blood and gunpowder. Moans filled the air with an occasional scream. Andrew had been trapped ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Aboard the Petrel
Saul "Captain! Another ship, she flies a black flag!" Came a cry from the crow’s nest. Andrew stood up and looked to the south with everyone else. There was a ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Winged Ones
uhh I think we should recuperate first. With so many wounded we wouldn't really be able to stand a chance in battle! A. S.
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Project L.I.F.E
O.K. I guess I am back. My brother threatened my life! What else could I do? Name- KK or Carissa Age - 13 Weapon: 10 small daggers SASS: Fire “What ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Project L.I.F.E
O.k. because my brother has threatedend me with my life, and no one has killed me yet or posted about me I am going to come back in . :) ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: My Heart Flutters
I really like this poem though sadly I have never loved a guy before.
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Aboard the Petrel
umm I am going to ignore the last post because there isn't any "girls" on the ship. Also, my stowaway Andrew isn't in the hold he is in the bread ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Winged Ones
Michel I woke to the smell of fish. I sat up and realized someone had put a blanket on me. I ached all over. Even my neck was sore now ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: stars and palms
I really like this poem. It could be a little longer, but it doesn't need that. The second stanza kind of jolted me out of my trance you made with ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Morse Lake
I Love this
May 18, 2010 -
Re: seaweed edited
Thank you Jas! I made some changes. I am still not sure about the grammer, but I sent you a pm. Hopefully the new phrases work well. :) A. S.
May 18, 2010 -
Re: What is a poem? Edited
Thank you for all the advice. I really appreciate it, and I have made a few changes to the second one. I might expand on the second one later like ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Aboard the Petrel
Saul "Are you okay?" said Fonzo. “umm . . . I just . . . sorry that I was looking . . .” Saul stuttered not having the faintest idea ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Winged Ones
Michel As I landed I winced then staggered over to sit by Kaylee. I leaned against the cave wall and closed my eyes. The conversations I overheard slowly faded into ...
May 17, 2010