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Re: Aboard the Petrel
Saul I sat feeling stupid. While I was in the sick ward we were being attacked. My attention was caught by a black man being pulled in. He was soaked ...
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Re: Nine=Trouble!!!! (Now recently titled Ten=Trouble!!!!)
Hope I didn’t want to play hide-and-seek! Rootbeer would blow my cover right away. Anyway, Glen and I had actually gotten into an in-depth conversation about Harry Potter. We both ...
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Re: Winged Ones
Michael "Michel, I'm getting you out of here." Whispered Blake. I felt myself moving upward. My shoulder screamed and my head throbbed. The world began to swirl around me so ...
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Re: Final Jump
I LOVE this photo, but it could use a lot of improvment. There is lots of distractions. I love the flower though. It would be nice to see less or ...
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Re: Outdoors-y Photos
Nitpicks 1. This one was great. I love it. In the background there is some ornge spots that need to be removed. 2. I would have loved this one, but ...
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Re: Squash
This is just a random snapshot I took. I know it is not that good, but I posted it anyway. A. S.
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Re: Birch tree
This is a birch tree I am not at all sure about. I was just wondering what people thought. Originally there was a lot of other trees around, but I ...
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Re: Some pics :)
Thank You again for all the advice! I have never gotten this many comments :) A. S.
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Re: I guess we'll just have to adjust.
First I am also addicted to close ups :) Now for nitpicks and opinions. 1. I loved this! The lighting and the blurriness is perfect! I am wondering what the ...
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Re: ram
I don't see the picture . . . . Before you submit things you should get the preview. It is to the left of the button submit. . . A. ...
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Re: Flower
This is cool, and the swirls made me stop and look. I agree with what everyone else has said. I don't really like how the stem is so thick. You ...
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Re: Winged Ones
Micheal I tried to spin heave it off me, but the wolf was too heavy. I struggled to get my arm unpinned. I closed my eyes as it lunged for ...
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Re: Warriors: (like the books)
Rainstorm Rainstorm had to hold his frustration in. Mudpaw was never going to become a warrior, and then Rainstorm would be the failure. “Again, and this time be fast enough ...
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Re: This is a spring morning
Thankyou for all the advice. I will try to revise it. Or maybe just take the same concept and write a new poem . . . Thanks again A. S.
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Re: Nine=Trouble!!!! (Now recently titled Ten=Trouble!!!!)
Hope I handed Glen the huge book. “I’m not sure you will like it. It’s Jane Austen’s work. Kind of lovey dovey. But, not at the same time.” “Yeah her ...
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