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Re: I'm new here.
Welcome to YWS where you can post your works and get advice on how to become a bettwer writer. One tip I usually give out is when you click My ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: The Akachi Chapter 2
Chapter 2 I felt something slamming my chest three times before air went down my throat. This went on for about 3 minutes. I opened my eyes as I choked ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: The Conversation of Cats Part 4
Really good! i love it! you have some good writing skills leahweird. Its really descriptive and some good vocabulary. I wish I had your descriptiveness and vocab so that my ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Gravity's Pull
Really good! i love it! you have some good writing skills ahhhsmusch. Its really descriptive and some good vocabulary. I wish I had your descriptiveness and vocab so that my ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: You, the essence of my praise
This is a really good poem. You have a really good gift in writing poetyry, while i have no good skill in writing poetry. Keep up the good work ~Arah~
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Hello and I am new!
Welcome to YWS. You will have a great time and with others help, you will be able to boost your writing skills so they will be better than ever.
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Buying Time
This is really good Ancient! I agree with ajt about the cat and the twist is shocking. Third Person Omniscient seems to come easily to you, but its harder for ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: The Akachi Prologue and Chapter 1
Prologue People try to believe myths are just myths. Myths like dragons, fairies, vampires, werewolves, and anymore you could think of. They are as real as you are to your ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Untitled as of Yet. (Unfinished)
Really good! i love it! you have some good writing skills Devan. Its really descriptive and some good vocabulary. I wish I had your descriptiveness and vocab so that my ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Cold's Trickery
I agree with Solly. It does sound like a child until you get to a few certain lines which explain its really about a duckling. The spoiler is really good
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: The Corner of the World
Really good! i love it! you have some good writing skills ancient. Its really descriptive and some good vocabulary. I wish I had your descriptiveness and vocab so that my ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Shadowed Tracks (Prologue)
Love This keep it coming :)
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Chapter Four: NaNo
Love it, a really good addition
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Heroes and Demons (Chapter 1)
Really interesting, I agree with the others, relook at the beginning
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Family of Sinners Part 1
This is a story i wrote with my friends a long time ago before we had a big argument and blow out D: Enjoy this, Part 2, and my Novel ...
Nov 17, 2011