Aquareed

Trees

Ok, thank you :)

i know the tense in this part is messed up, I forgot half way through. Just to clarify, it is supposd to be past. Chapter 2 Bronwyn I got home ...

Hey Chuck13, I'm going to review your work today Part I: Grammar Mistakes are in bold:) The two boys climbed over a fence and took a short cut through a ...

Oops!

Lol, thanks.

Hey Auteur, this's Aqua and I'm going to review your work today. When I first started reading your piece of work, it grabbed me in right away. I thought the ...

Hey Legandaryrose, I'm Aqua and I'll be annoying you with a review today! :) First I wanted to say that I think this was actually pretty grabbed my attention really ...

Prologue Bronwyn Is this how it is meant to end? A lonely death, entombed beneath the earth, without knowing whether I am a meter below the ground or a kilometre. ...

Thanks! That was really helpful :pirate3:

Prologue Bronwyn Is this how it is meant to end? A lonely death, entombed beneath the earth, without knowing whether I am a meter below the ground or a kilometre. ...

This is just the first part of something I started writing and I want to see if its OK. reviews would be helpful, cause I don't know whether I'm going ...

XD. Ok, I'm not really *qualifyed* to reply to this, but I just randomly came across it. Obviously, you like big names! Don't expect any constructive criticism from me: I ...

I really liked this! I couldn't find any grammatic errors (which is a first) lol. I really like Bronwyn: she's awesome :) There is abviously something wrong with her, or ...

Ok, I'm good!