Aquareed

Ok, knitescu, I will be your first reviewer (yay!). Nitpicks The sun blazed down on me, and I smiled as I felt my body tingle with the heat. That's how ...

Rewrite of Chapter 1..... :pirate3: Chapter 1 Vivien I pulled my hood down lower as I peeked out of the alleyway in Port Taylon. The buildings were tall and narrow ...

After muchos deliberation, I decided to start writing my nameless story again *applause, please*. I usually don't write stories again after I abandon them, but I liked this one. Anyway, ...

"Why are you here?" Erika's mouth fell open in horror. "What are you doing? You're dating one of my students, aren't you? It's Catherine, isn't it? Tim, I know she ...

These are really good! :pirate3:

If you don't mind, could you review my story? Your reviews are great :pirate3:

Ok, thanks for the review. It's pronounced just like it's spelt.

Wow. You may not have liked it but I did! I don't think I couldd find any nitpicks, but I'm not the best person to ask. But it was great, ...

Ok....Aquareed reviewing. Nitpicks It was a full moon, We were staring at each other, I didn't want to ruin this moment but I knew that this wasn't right. Ok, this ...

I didn't know whether to out this in historical, fantasy or romance, but I settled for romance. It's set in a world like ours but the Romans haven't invaded Britain ...

Layla Short and slim with fiery red hair and wide, very grey eyes, almost silver. Very pale skin. She's extremely beautiful, but that is basically all her good points. She ...

This is poem I have to hand in for English. It's pretty bad, as a lot of my school poems are, but please help me improve it.... Home The sound ...

Please comment and any suggestions for story titles would be very welcome :p Chapter 1 The moon was high in the sky, a lustrous pearl cradled in the indigo belly ...

Thanks for commenting, guys. Just to clarify, the MC is in fact a boy, but you're right, I hadn't given any inclination that he was.

This is something I started writing randomly, as I do, then I liked it and wrote a bit more. I would really apreciate comments, I don't know if its any ...