Aquareed

So the story I'm writing features a coven of witches, who do a lot of physical training, so the older ones have assassin-like powers. I'm having problems writing the training ...

From the perspective of Katie in Enchanted She doesn't sleep well at all. She’s not an insomniac, there’s nothing wrong with her. She’s not lazy either – she makes herself ...

Hi Maleficia! I will be reviewing this piece today! First Impressions My first impressions of this piece were that it was quite seems quite interesting and it's intruiging that people ...

Could you review a chapter of my fantasy novel? Pretty please? It's [url]topic91435.html[/url] Cheers Aquareed

Not finished with this chapter yet, and I'm not quite sure about it... 2 I woke up in my own bed. As soon as my eyes opened, Cassie flung herself ...

That was the best thing I read all day. In a twisted sort of way. It completely scared me (I jumped when someone came in the room) and I thought ...

Wow. I really liked the way you can identify with the main character in this, she seems very....human. The only nitpicks I found were these: As the cars started to ...

Chapter 1 I lifted the damp t-shirt to my face and inhaled in ecstasy. I loved the smell of damp laundry. A brisk wind that smelt richly of overturned leaves ...

Soooooo....This was going to be the prologue of my novel, but now I'm thinking of cutting it out. Tell me what you think :) The scent of magic threaded its ...

Ok, I'm Aquareed, I'll be your reviewer today *rolls up sleeves* Nitpicks I instantly felt like a cold-blooded murderer. I thought about my dad in that instant Thjere are too ...

Ok, thanks for the review :)

I'll do some :)

Hi! can you review part of my fantasy story, nameless? it's at.... Thanks! :pirate3:

Hello Nimueh! Don't worry about random questions....lots of the people around here are very random. And I've copyrighted the pirate smiley :pirate3: You can use the angry one. Just not ...

Can you take a look at my "nameless story, chapter 2?" Pleeease? :pirate3: