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Re: The Way You Say My Name.
Outside my window it rained, While inside my heart it pained. A tear trickled down my cheek And I found it hard to believe That I’m feeling this way for ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Give pain, then take it again.
Phew! That was blazing with anger. Nice intensity, I'll say. It was deep in its feelings and definitely very well written. Loved it!
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Remembering you!
It was beautifully written. I love poems that have a mesmerizing finish. And your poem had it. :-) It's something which touches the heart. I especially loved that line, Hope ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: That Night
Yes, I agree with the ones who said above me that the rhyme scheme was not well worked out, which actually made the poem a bit boring. But, the narration ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Kyle
That was beautiful and mesmerizing. It was poetic and melodious. I myself am not a good dancer, so I usually love these situations when a not-so-good dancer wins over a ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Searching For You
That was short and meaningful. It is seemingly a simple poem but the meaning and feeling that lies beneath it is beautiful and touching. I liked it tons! :-D
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Kiss me in the rain, baby.
Couldn't have been better. I fell in love with the story. Especially, the part wen he asks her to marry him, how both of them think the opposite. It was ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Dear Hanna
This kind of situation can be really heart breaking. Especially, when written with so much feelings, you can't help but end up in tears after reading it. The story was ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: I will always love you. *old*
This was amazing. A few grammatical errors like, 'then' in place of 'than' should be corrected. Otherwise, it was one of the best write-ups I've read till date. That someone ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mr. Rapist
Something that brought tears to my eyes. It was very touching and sad. Keep up such great talent. Wonderful work!
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Need You.
I tell myself, "This is enough!" I find reasons To forget you. But, I don't know why It always happens to me. Nothing makes sense, Reasons run out of me. ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: The Sadness of Loving
The poem is really very well written. The rhymes added to its sophistication. And if it's really a true story then I'd say such women are a curse to the ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Lust
I liked it mainly because it is something that most people can easily relate to. It's got a lot of emotion and feelings. Something that makes you sit back and ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Diary
Nicely written. Full of feelings and emotions. Quite touching.
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Reality
WHOA! That was quite daring, I would say. I mean, you need a lot of courage to feel and write that way. Its Realistic, that's what it is. You have ...
Jul 22, 2011
