Anwesha

That was so nice. :-) It was tragic, no doubt, but even then it seemed as if there is still some kind of hope, a wish, a desire. A kind ...

There’s a melancholy inside, Leaving somber thoughts behind. It was never meant to feel this way, Never was it meant to kill this way. The fire inside my heart made ...

Amazing. The kind of feeling which you have expressed here is usually quite difficult to put into words. I am saying this because I have experienced it, too. But, you've ...

That was really nice and sweet. Even I love to sing so I can relate quite well with you words and whatever you said is perfectly correct. Music definitely is ...

Now, that was good. The way you put the conversation into the poem was really very nicely done. It added a more realistic and practical, meaningful touch to the poem. ...

She had been crying all night But, never let him know. She had been thinking of him all day But, never let him know. She feared losing him But, never ...

I really liked that. Especially the way you described what "changing" actually means. This kind of things keep happening, you know. BFF's seldom last forever. I myself lost a friend ...

That was lovely, dear. It was so poetic, I actually could hear music playing with it. The feel of the lyrics is so touching, I'd love to hear someone(you, of ...

An ocean overflowing with dilemma, And million regrets, leaving a scar. A blur and distorted image of life And nights which seem longer than a lifetime. A flowing river of ...

Your poem was really good. Just one thing I'd like to mention is that, the rhyme scheme could have been better. Maybe you had no intention to rhyme but in ...

Good one. Those 'i's better be capitalized. :-) And the word 'companies' sounds, you know, a bit less poetic in such kind of a poetry, if you get what I ...

That was really good. Such a common incident, these keep happening you know, but such an extraordinary way of describing it. True essence of poetry could be felt out here. ...

That was a good one. I found the rhymes to be perfect and meaningful. The poem as a whole was very strong and confident. Especially, I liked the last two ...

It was a nice one. Full of truth, because that's what almost all boys do. Just one thing I'd like to point out. tell her she’s the only one, without ...

Everything in life happens for a reason, no doubt. Yet, sometimes we look back and regret about things we've said and done. These regrets and sorrows should not be allowed ...