Anwesha

Well, usually I'm a bit critical of poems that don't rhyme but, somehow, this one was different. ;-) I specially liked he question-answer style. I especially loved this part- Souls ...

Like, like, like a lot! The idea was superb! And the comparison with painting was even better. It's amazing how such great ideas can flow from your pen. You're definitely ...

Nice one. I liked it more because, unlike some other poem, this one has a message to give. You can learn from it. That's what is needed for a good ...

Nice one except that your 'there's should be 'their's and 'breath's should be 'breathe's. Hope you got me. :-D The drama in the poem, the climax was well-described. How a ...

That was really nice. Especially, the ending was very sweet. Some of the small letter at the beginning of a line seemed a bit "wrong", though. The use of commas ...

It seems like Reasons don’t exist, And Doubts just fade away. It seems like Words explain nothing, And it seems like Smiling is inevitable. It seems like Risks reduce the ...

Gosh!! That was scary! :-o But very imaginative and expressive. And as you said, "graphical". The metaphor of the lioness was attractive, indeed. I found the title very unique and ...

That sweet magic that happened Between you and me, when least expected, Had captivated me such that I still can’t believe that you went away. Not every feeling has a ...

Waow! Captivating. :-) A couple of corrections- It's written "may paintings" where it should be "many". If you've used "End", you should have used "beginning" in place of "begin. Your ...

That was Dramatic! :-D Really nice and touching. The metaphors were well used. The feelings were well expressed. Even the selection of words were good. The last line's sounding a ...

Now, that was some poetry!! Awesome!I especially liked the comparison with angels. :-) The descriptions were lovely which made the poem all the more beautiful. Just one thing I had ...

Very true. I totally agree with you. But then, I've always felt that the use of some attractive words, while speaking or writing, is always impressive. They add a kind ...

Lovely! There was such a lot of emotion in the poem, it genuinely moved me. That pain, that care, that sorrow, everything was brought about so naturally, fluently. It seemed ...

This was very touching. There was something in it that could penetrate into the readers feelings and leave behind a sense of hope and satisfaction, as if somethings are better ...

I liked it. It was short and meaningful. But, the thing is, you could have added some more charm in it. It seems a bit too simple to me. Like, ...