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Hi there! I can see you are new here, welcome to YWS!! We are all very nice here, did you already went to the Welcome forum? If you didn't go ...

Hello there!! I'll begin by saying that the fast-paced, action style that you have here is very engaging, and keeps the reader interested, but di try to make sure you ...

Hi there :) I like this story so far- I think you've got a really good beginning here! Firstly I think you should break up the beginning paragraph. I'd put ...