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Re: A story about a 15 yr old Photographer and falling in love.
Hi there! I can see you are new here, welcome to YWS!! We are all very nice here, did you already went to the Welcome forum? If you didn't go ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Her First Mistake: Part 1
Hello there!! I'll begin by saying that the fast-paced, action style that you have here is very engaging, and keeps the reader interested, but di try to make sure you ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Her First Mistake: Part 1
Hello there!! I'll begin by saying that the fast-paced, action style that you have here is very engaging, and keeps the reader interested, but di try to make sure you ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: A story about a 15 yr old Photographer and falling in love.
Hi there :) I like this story so far- I think you've got a really good beginning here! Firstly I think you should break up the beginning paragraph. I'd put ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: A story about a 15 yr old Photographer and falling in love.
SnapShot! More chapters to come!! Chapter 1 Tap tap tap. That’s the sound of my foot tapping anxiously as the clock counts down the last few seconds of this week. ...
Feb 21, 2009
