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Re: Playing Me
I like it so much. It is a very nice song..
May 30, 2009 -
Re: No More
Its a really good poem. I like it very much. Good use of words. As fragile said rhyming was a bit off at places. But, it had a really good ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: Life Without You
Life without you There is nothing left at all There is nothing to recall We used to be together And you left me alone… O come-on just tell me what ...
May 27, 2009 -
Re: Loneliness
OMG Dhriti... I love this poem...every time I read it, it just touches my heat n i feel like crying... I am sorry i left you there and came here...i ...
May 27, 2009 -
Re: Mirror as a Mirror
Wow...i like the poem very much.. you have done a great job... :) - Anshita
May 27, 2009 -
Re: Just a few
It is a really nice song. I like it very much. I has a nice rhythm to it and everyone who reads it can actually make a beat for it, ...
May 27, 2009 -
Re: Miss You
Miss You You were there by my side, and I kept on thinking that it will last forever But no I was wrong, I never thought that time will be ...
May 27, 2009 -
Re: Photo Landfill
These are really nice. :D - Anshita
May 27, 2009 -
Re: This is not a fairytale
I really like it. It has a nice rhythm to it. The lyrics are really good. I love it. :P - Anshita
May 27, 2009 -
Re: Everything you do, Makes me want to come to you
Thank you.. :)
May 27, 2009 -
Re: Destiny
Destiny I guess I am heading in the right direction Because I am so confused I guess I need to have the right selection To be in with you I ...
May 26, 2009 -
Re: Hapily ever after
is a really nice song. it has a very nice rhythm to it and whoever reads it can make up a different beat for the song, which is good. i ...
May 26, 2009 -
Re: Hi..I am new here..
Hey name is Anshita Khanna and I just love to write songs. I am so Happy because i joined YWS. Here you can post stuff and people can review it ...
May 26, 2009 -
Re: It's Written In The Rain
The song is really good and yeah as Carly said try to mix up the rhyme scheme a little bit (i think it can make the song better). I am ...
May 26, 2009 -
Re: Everything you do, Makes me want to come to you
You were there by my side, All the time You made me laugh, you made me cry, and you made me smile Do you see what’s happening here? Step by ...
May 23, 2009
