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Re: To Lily
OMG..this is perfect. I don't have words fro this poem. its simply awesome. Ans seeing that this happened to you in real life. OMG. I am so sorry. I was ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: What Happened a poem about today's lazy society
What Happened by Hao Nguyen I look out the window and what do I see? I see the tall, towering trees. I see the dew-soaken grass. I hear the orchestra ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Rain in My Bottle
You're my rain in a bottle ottle. Oh, oh, oh Keep me company, thats what you should do. I'll catch you falling from the sky, little droplets in my bottle. ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Just me and You
I sit here and think of you And all the time I had was with you, But in the end it was all a waste. I think was will sound ...
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: Happy now
Im left here alone, drowning in silence. But the words they dont come, im defying science. My tears they roll down, i cant seem to block them. My heart it ...
Jun 4, 2009 -
Re: Hi, I'm Ellie
hey.. You will have loads of fun here.. It is one of the best websites on the internet.. ~ Anshita
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Alone With Your Guitar
I watch As you walk away; Away from the crowd, From the groups of friends Absorbed in each other, Not sparing you A glance. I know you're lonely; I know ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Just friends
I told you that it couldn’t be. You weren’t meant for me. I said you were my best friend. But you couldn’t (can't) be more than that. I think it ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Tree of deceit
i like your poem. Nice use of word, may be you could use some more words which could explain you feeling better. It had a nice rhythm and a nice ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Me and You
I like the lyrics very much. You had good choice of words. I’m saying You are my whole heart And nothing can shake it My wounds heal My heart is ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Destiny
Hey guys... Can you review this song... I really like it and i will love to hear your suggestions.. please do review.. - Anshita
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: Hii..I am new...
hey Aakanksha... Welcome to YWS. I hope you enjoy here. This is one of the best websites on the Internet. And yeah, no body is perfect here, so don't worry...post ...
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: You
Thank you June and JabberHut.. June - I don't really have a tune yet for this song. Jabber - thanks for the advice, I will try and come up with ...
May 31, 2009 -
Re: You
You You… You have the best eyes You… You make me smile You… You are perfect You… You are my favourite subject You are the one I can’t live without ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Don't Know What Love Is
I Love It
May 30, 2009
