Anshita

Me and my loneliness Often talk about how If you were here, how would it feel? What would you say? You would be shocked on this And laugh your beautiful ...

I really like this. It flows very nicely and I love the simplicity. I could definitely feel the emotion, you did a very good job there. It's a great piece. ...

I like this, it has a great rhythm to it, I could hear it in my head. I would love to see the whole song once you finish it. Please ...

I wrote the first part to it more than 2 years ago. Here is the link My writing style changed a bit, sorry about that. Hope you like this piece. ...

Why is my life based on pains, no one respects my feelings Were you a dream, or not. You were the only wish of my life You left some footprints ...

The Guilt Remained Year 2030, Whistler, British Columbia John and I were playing on the sled in the snow and as I pushed him, bad memories haunted me and I ...

Narrated by Lizzie People say that if you love someone set them free. If they come back, they are yours, and if they don’t, they never were. But what if ...

Hey there Very good song you got there. You are a very good writer. Everything flowed so well. The rhyme scheme used for this song was perfect. The rhythm was ...

Hi there General comments I really liked it. As the above comments said anyone who reads can relate to it. I can relate better because I am kind of in ...

Hi there I liked it. It's nice. General comments You might want to add on to it because it is a bit too short. I liked the mood of the ...

Life has turned its back towards me I don’t know what to do All of a sudden I want to shout and scream And make my way through ------------------------------------------------ It ...

Awesome..can't wait for other parts... :} its really good

thank you so much. I wrote this song for my best friend and I wrote it in like 5 mins. I really thank you for your review, it mans a ...

Thank you so much for you're review. I will keep those points in mind and try and make my song better. Thank you once again ~Anshita

Looking at the stars Feeling all alone Feeling like I’ve never felt before Teardrops rolling by It all ended with a goodbye I could never find the reason alone --------------------------------------