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Re: Flutter By
It was just beautiful I really liked it. You are a great writer and I think that you should leave this as it is it s very very good
May 23, 2011 -
Re: The Fatal Wound
It was really good bu a little to short I think that it could be much better if you added some more to it. Even though I thought that it ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Welcome here are a few things to remember
Hi new members welcome to YWS this is a fun website where you can share your work with other writers. This website has a few things that you should try ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Mean Girls
I love this poem it is amazing. Even though some may say that it is short I think that it is the perfect length. I also like the topic I ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Photography this Spring!
Oh my they are just breathtakingly beautiful loved the way how in the picture with the fence in it the front was in focus but the back was blurry. You ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Kitty's Photography
great job these are great shots but next time take off the date stamp all it does is distract the viewer.
May 21, 2011 -
Re: A Little of Everything!! Points Up For Gabs
They were okay I mean the penny heart was amazing and beautiful. But the others weren't very good the sculpture was dull and did not have very much detail. The ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: I Will
It is amazing but I just have a few problems with it. I feel like there should be more. I think that it sounds like the beginning to a longer ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Could You?
I think it is beautiful. The perfect length and really meaningful. you are an amazing writer keep writing good job
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Saved by him
Anna was walking home from school when it happened. She was walking down the off the main road it was not much of a street more like a large ally. ...
May 20, 2011 -
Re: Pain
Beautiful poem you are an amazing writer. The length was perfect. I liked how the lines were shorter at the beginning. I think that you are great keep writing.
May 20, 2011 -
Re: You
Good job. The poem was just beautiful Keep writing.
May 20, 2011 -
Re: Brokenhearted
Beautiful. It is short but it says so much. It had I felt like it was a little bit short but I still felt the emotions that you were trying ...
May 20, 2011 -
Re: Popularity
You can be such a bitch And you know it You don't really give a shit You are as nice as can be Well that is when you want to ...
May 20, 2011
