Anonamuse

It seems to be very emo, a lot like something I went through a while ago. Well, anyway, your style is good, but you could use a little work on ...

Wow. -blink, blink- I really like this, a lot. And it does seem to be from a musical, which is good. It's believable, which is hard to accomplish a lot ...

Nice job. But you might need a little more work, seems like it was a little forced, just a little. Don't stop writing, you can only get better as time ...

I could really connect with your piece. But as stated earlier, your use of 'he' and 'they' confused me for a while. Is 'they' the group of teens or the ...

Your poem is good it has emotion, but it lacks feeling. I like it, free form is probably the easiest thing to use.

I like it, it reminds me of something that happened to me a long time ago. The end is a bit rushed, but other than that I didn't notice too ...

1. I think it's a little short, but it's good for how long it is. 2. You're describtion needs some work, but other than that it's alright. 3. I might ...

This really caught my eye. I don't have too much to say about it actually. It seems to be a really good start. I can't wait to read the rest.

Chapter One I got off the train with a sigh, I was finally to my destination, and I didn’t have to put up with all the people staring at me ...

Way to go, Alice. I think I might have already read this, but who cares. It's good.