Anonamuse

All I can say is wow. Like almost everyone else said, and I agree with them, the first thing that I thought about was marriage, but holy cow I was ...

I like your lyrics, they're good and the meaning, as I took it is a very good one. Keep on writing.

You left so long ago- five years if I remember right, and now you come back and try to find your place. You see me standing there, my back against ...

I agree that there are too many The's, but it's understandable, trust me, I do it sometimes as well. But over all I liked it, needs some work, but it's ...

I like your poem. Those are the main things that go through a persons head when they first get into a relationship. I didn't find much of anything to critic ...

I enjoyed your lyrics, and I did fnd something behind your lyrics. Which I guess means a freak. But I thought they seemed to be coming a Reaper following someone ...

I liked your lyrics, but they seemed to be lacking something. I can't put my finger on it, but it does seem to be missing something. I think I only ...

Bashing your muse I see. If you have muse that is. -shakes head- I understand where you got this, can't think of anything, then it happens and you don't understand ...

Seems to Emo to me, like you tried to hard. And I would just start over from scratch, that would be easier than trying to fix what you messed up ...

All I can say is, 'wow'. Moving, and it's something that needs to be adressed. The way we treat the planet is wrong, but then again so is man. Anywho, ...

Holy cow. Morbid, and romantic. How did you manage that one? It's amazing. I love it for no other reason than it's morbid, and very personal at the same time.

The caps was a bit over doing it. But over all, it was really good, a teen struggling to understand what happened to friend that was close. Hits home you ...

Love it. Seems real, like a letter written to David, or an entry in a diary. It's a good way to write. Like your style.

It's good, almost made me give up my dream of acting, but then I remembered that I do theatre. Your style is good, I like the way you brought everything ...

When I first saw this I thought about the millitary, but as I read it I realized that you gave it a new meaning. I really like the lyrics, but ...