Anonamuse

I think that my printing sucks (But I'm slowly changing it into something I think is good), but my cursive is pretty good as long as I'm using a pen. ...

6/10 Interesting avatar

Granted, but my wish is that was that my wish wouldn't be granted. I wish that my wish wasn't granted.

"In her eyes" -Josh Groban

7/10 because it's just a little hard to understand, but it's cute.

Untrue, I rarely use smileys. The person below me has OCD. (Obsessive compulsive disorder)

Thanks Snoink! I'll go back through it in a while to fix somethings and add a little more. I haven't done much editting yet, but I'm hoping I'll be able ...

For everyone who helped me get this started. Alice, RoryLegend, LilyReagan, Fandilocks… If I’ve forgotten anyone please let me know Owen walked down the darkened alleyways of New York with ...

Um...what the -blank- was that. It didn't seem to be anything more than just a bunch of noises. However it did get my attention, which might have been you're goal, ...

I had a lot of trouble figuring out how your verses related to the moonlight. They don't seem to have any contection what so ever. Not to mention a lack ...

I had a little trouble figuring out what it was about. Your rhym was a little weird as well, it seemed to move slow. You’re like the ruby amongst crystals, ...

Periwinkle, thanks for your help. I really appreciate it. I've gone through and fixed the things you've noticed, which I thank you for. And I would like to add, that ...

Listening to the thunder rolling over head she crawled into her small hide-away to get closer to the window. She looked out at the grey sky with a smile, this ...

I liked the way you created the scene, but like said above repeating the last line is a bit over bearing, but otherwise it does add a good feel to ...

Your poem seemed to be a bit forced, and like stated before, repeating "sitting in a sea of people" does get slightly annoying after a while, but otherwise I thought ...