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Re: In case you were interested...
Hey! I'm Terri Marie (for the time being at least!) and I'm fairly new to the writing game. I mean, I wrote at school, and was reasonably good at it, ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: The First Last Stand of George Arthur Montgomery - Chapter 1
Gilgamesh, they called me. The King, the one who would never fall. Like Achilles, they said. But Achilles wasn’t invulnerable; even he suffered that single, ultimately fatal, weakness. And I ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: The Decoder - Chapter 1
Hey :) I really like this extract. Overall, it is very captivating, and makes me want to know more about the characters, the mysterious decoder, and the strangely dressed party. ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: The Place Where Good Men Die #3
Hey :) Well, this review, such as it shall be, won't be too long, I assure you. There really isn't much for me to say- I just wanted to express ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Character How-do-you-dos
*From 'The First Last Stand of George Theodore Arthur Montgomery'* Hallo there, how do you do? Seeing as you asked, my name's George Theodore Arthur Mongomery, quite a mouthful I ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Interview!
Why do I do what I do? Like every other man in our dragoon, I just pull my weight for England. I like to think we're doing some good here, ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Music/songs that make ya wanna keep on fighting.
My favourite motivational songs are 'Smile' and 'Don't Give Up (You Are Loved)', both by Josh Groban :)
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Blood on my hands(edited)
Hey :) I want to say that I really like the idea for the story, about a teenage murderer etc. Your writing style is very distinctive and easy to read; ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: The First Last Stand of George Theodore Arthur Montgomery
Thanks for the great review! I noticed the cliche, but its fine i reckon :) thanks again! :)
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: The First Last Stand of George Theodore Arthur Montgomery
Gilgamesh, they called me. The King, the one who would never fall. Like Achilles, they said. But Achilles wasn’t invulnerable; he had his mortal heel. And I too have a ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Confessions Of A Wallflower
Haha completely agree! :) I think your poem is great, the way it sort of flows, but it doesn't have that same old monotonous beat. I really like it, expecially ...
Nov 18, 2011
