AnneMarie96

Ohh, wow. That was a great attention grabber! I realize this is just the prologue so I'll save the questions for the real chapters! So far great jobb!! --Anne

I love the emotion in this! I agree with eveyone else! This poem is amazing! I'm going to have to read your other stuff! --Anne

The cool breeze rushed over my face and tousled my hair. The rain was coming down just hard enough to drench my hair. Everyone was standing around tears in their ...

I loved this. It was deep. I could feel the emotions in it. I could visualise everything. I felt like I was there! This was great. This was true? I'm ...

Your plot sounds interesting. I am looking forward to what you are going to write next. Are Lily and Luke going to be in the story any more? If so ...

The last time I saw her was the eighth grade graduation party. Her beautiful auburn hair was curled to her shoulders. Her bright yellow dress on. Emma was the girl ...

I loved how realistic this piece is. I loved how Chris was sweet and didn't make any cocky comments. You can't really find guy characters that don't do that. I ...

Oh my gosh! I had chills. This was amazing! I literaly could not find anything wrong with it! You are an amazing writer. I read the first part of this ...

Sorry the color I used didn't work. I really did love your story though! and I can't wait to read what you are gonna do next!

Hey there!! I'm gonna try my hardest to give you helpful comments! I never thought that love could sneak up on you so fast and suck you in. I wasn't ...

Oh wow, the emotions in this story were mind-boggling. You took the reader through many differnet levels of emotions. Your story decribed the feelings that most people wish to feel ...

I like cheesy, sometimes it's just what people need! I liked your story, just because even if she didn't figure out how the boy felt, she still had that one ...

Ohh wow, that was amazing. I read My Falling Sun 7. I'm assuming there is more I missed and I will have to go back and read. But so far ...

I really liked this and I can't wait to read more. I can personally relate to this story. All of my best friends have ditched me for their 'reputations'. I ...

Wow, I didn't expect that. There were a few gramar problems here and there but I am horrible at grammar so what do I know? I did love the thought ...