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Re: Welcome Home: The Highs and Lows
The Anchor An empty house. An empty yard. Empty. Hearts filled to ones content with anticipation, future desires, anxiety and doubts. Full. Our dollhouse of a home looked upon us ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: The Observatory
What happened to Charlie? I made a promise five years ago never to forget, a pinkie promise like Charlie used to say. Many commended me for my act of courage ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Hello!
Thank you all so much for the replies. I really appreciate it! This site turned out even better than I had expected :!: Anyway, I'll be sure to PM you ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Just a feeling?
I think I have to agree with the others. I'm not going to repeat what they said because I think you understood what they meant. However, I can give you ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Hello!
Hi I'm Anne, I just discovered this website a couple days ago and I think I'm going to like it here. I love reading other people's work and I absolutely ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Three Letters
In general, I though it was very well written. It's straight to the point which is refreshing to see in poetry. The feeling is easily conveyed to the reader. Though ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Stone Mountain
I really like the picture with the trees as a background and the gathering of people in the front. There's a certain contrast that makes the picture that much better. ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: End of the year
Yeah I do agree, putting it in stanzas would really help and make the poem that much better. Apart from that be careful with punctuation and grammar throughout the poem. ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: Shall I compare thee...to definitely not Shakespeare!
Shall I compare definitely not Shakespeare! Poetry as archaic as the air; Iambic pentameter and couplets, Writing this poem is the task to bear, Rhyming scheme and the Shakespearean sonnet. ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: The Fate of Hubrisius
The Fate of Hubrisius Pyrrha, Epimetheus’ daughter, and Deucalion, her husband and Prometheus’ son, were the sole survivors during Zeus’ grand Deluge. The Deluge of Deucalion, as it is called, ...
Jul 17, 2010
