Annabeth

Poor Clover! such bad luck... You said they live in a village? it dosen't seem like it, what with the glass counters, 2 level buildings, ovens, and hairnets. does this ...

You sort of rushed te whole thing along, you really need to fill it out and tell us all about your characters besides, how can Eliabeth know that she won't ...

The prolouge was awesome, but i don't think there was enough connection in the first chapter. write more, i really want to know why these are under the same title. ...