AnnaMamaLama

I just hope we don't forget to do this every year ;) It's been an awesome time guys, I only just joined but I've got some great support off you ...

I haven't read the previous chapters, but I think I will, this story was really nicely written. At some points though, consider maybe expanding your sentences so you have short, ...

This may be a little confusing, so I'm hoping for some advice. Please review! :) -------------- What dictates what’s real or not What changes fate and makes it hard Who ...

Thanks for the reviews! :) I didn't want to make it too intricate so I kept the simplicity of it and occasionally used a bit more ornate wording :) I'll ...

The main character's name was meant to be kept a secret, I'm planning on revealing it later on. And I noticed that mistake after I posted it, I'll change that ...

Yeah, this is quite soon after my last post, but I wanted to get a review on it. I hope you enjoy :) ------ There’s nothing here but nothing Four ...

Yeah I reposted this because I think it was in a weird format. Anyway, I hope you enjoy it, remember: this is all towards my characterization :) -------- He stared ...

I like this, it's very deep and meaningful and you'v got some good flow there. I'd suggest maybe adding a little imagery here, it would make it sound much more ...

Generally, a well-written piece, but you might want to consider making the character a bit more superfluous, you don't want to have him constantly fawning over her like she's something ...

Wow, I like the beginning and it's a really interesting idea :) You've obviously given the characters some thought, but you could have made some of the statements about the ...

Yeah, I know it's quite long, but I'll be honest with you, that's just half of it. I wrote another one thats about fifty pages long, so I'll post that ...

This is just a little story I wrote. It's set in the aftermath of the Prince of Persia storyline (PS3 Game) and I hope you like it.