AngieChild

I'm always particularly fond of science fictions with robots that contain specific technical terms, and not just senseless writing without research, thus good job on that so far! The only ...

I've never been a fan of first-person stories, unless the main character him/herself is a comical-but-not-enough-to-get-annoying story-teller and that there's actually some real feelings from him/her,

Everyone else has already corrected your grammar and all that, but I can't help putting a few more notes in. Apologies if I'm being repetitive. First of all, I really ...