AngieChild

Just so you know, I've already written plenty of chapters, and please don't mind if they get ultra long. I'm not a fan of this chapter, since my favorite part ...

I'm always particularly fond of science fictions with robots that contain specific technical terms, and not just senseless writing without research, thus good job on that so far! The only ...

Because no one expresses my own ideas better.

I've never been a fan of first-person stories, unless the main character him/herself is a comical-but-not-enough-to-get-annoying story-teller and that there's actually some real feelings from him/her,

Everyone else has already corrected your grammar and all that, but I can't help putting a few more notes in. Apologies if I'm being repetitive. First of all, I really ...

Thank you so much for the comments! Honestly didn't expect any. :) It would be great if I get full reviews! I've only changed one (annoyingly obvious) mistake so far, ...

Just a quick pop-in to say hello to everyone so I don't look like I'm intruding, so, hello. :) Hope I'll learn a lot here!

Hi, basically I'm rewriting something that I wrote back when I was 14, and it used to be an obvious copy of another well-known novel, so I'm trying to fix ...