Angels-Symphony

I lol'd hard. You have lack of conflict, lack of plot. Good job. There is only one "character", and there is no antagonist. And there's a random switch of voices, ...

Avaline Delancy Just as I was about to enter the elevator, the doors slid open, revealing Brennan and Jackie. “Jackie?” I asked, startled. “Where have you been? I’ve been looking ...

*** Violet is answered ^^ *** Avaline Delancy After bidding farewell to Brennan, I went outside to spend some time by myself. Though I’d seen Jackie leave the building earlier, ...

***Hey Pudin, you know that Brennan has a ferret named Dweeb, right? xD Avaline is the one with a dog*** Avaline Delancy “I‘m sure you are,” I removed my hand. ...

Avaline Delancy I couldn’t sleep, it was impossible. I kept rolling around in my sleeping bag, flipping back and forth in a sad attempt to get comfortable. The time zones ...

The living room was really interesting. Different, but still interesting. “A bit different, huh?” She asked “Yes, my room is the whole floor,” I hesitated for the right words, “But ...

I like your accent.” She said with a genuine smile. I thought about how in the past other girls complimented me just to butter me up. Back then, I had ...

Pudin, I think we started writing our replies at the same time =_= Do you want to rewrite your post or do you want me to follow your lead? They're ...

The shape made its way closer toward me, slowly becoming the figure of a young girl. She beared long, chocolate brown hair and eyes green as emeralds. Wearing skinny jeans ...

Note: Hey guys ^^ Since there's four buildings for dorms at the boarding school, tell me who lives in building four :P It's hard to keep track of who and ...

My head craned over my shoulder, I smiled. I couldn’t help but find the situation a bit funny. I had the power to recreate myself at this boarding school, now ...

Avaline Delancy I heard footsteps coming from behind me, from more than two people. I waved a hand over my mouth as I yawned. Probably those butlers scurrying around with ...

Avaline Delancy Note: I did a name change Seconds passed. The minute hand neared the hour, coming closer and closer, and then…. The car stopped. Remaining in his seat, my ...

Reserving girl spot ^^

I'll make another character, a boy ;) Later, though.