Angels-Symphony

Hi ^^ It's Shina again. If you have time do you think you could review these for me. An attempt at poetry and a new chapter in my novel in ...

Two more things in desparate need of a review. An attempt at poetry and a chapter in my novel in desperate need of reviewing. Poem: Novel Beginning:

Thank you Sarah! I have 2 more that in desparate need of editing. First an attempt at poetry, the second a chapter in my novel I think should be read. ...

I am a newbie in desparate need of honest reviews. Please help me >< Poem: Novel Beginning:

(please note this is my second attempt at poetry) Also, read this with a beat! It makes more sense. Your mother, your father, Your sister, your brother, your aunts, your ...

Thank you for reviewing my story. I never changed prologue to preface and well, I guess that made it a dead target :lol: I wrote these paragraphs in october when ...

Thank you whoever you are! Sorry xD I didn't check your name before I clicked. But now I'm not losing as much as I was before. Thank you very much! ...

I apologize for using caps :oops: sorry >< You see I just joined and I, forgot the rules.

Angel of Death for critiquing my work honestly ^^ Castlesinthesky for being fabulously fabulous. Littleangelfire (Areida) for also being nice. Suzanne for helping me realize that poetry isn't exactly

Please tell me you are talking about June! I am losing now :oops: waa. But thank you half heartedly. Because I'm losing, but also flattered.

Well more than 90% filipino and I'm also spanish and chinese.

HAHA you guys are funny. I'm filipino. And you should vote for June. MY WRITING CAREER DEPENDS ON IT!

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PLEASE review my story. It's titled Angel's Symphony and I started it in october. Because of my newbieness I cannot post all the chapters, nor can I post each chapter ...