Angels-Symphony

I agree with June! This is fabulous and you are capable of fabulosity*~ A gift few are able to obtain. The rhyming is good, but I couldn't find the beat. ...

Shooting Stars The sky is poetry; all shades of blue. At night it could be a circus canopy— after the show is over— points of white painted on the roof. ...

Please review this poem! It needs a review ^^

Please review this! I'd like to know what you think of it. Tear it apart, and break it down! Always Inspired, Shina

Once again I'd request you read this with a beat ^^ Also please review my other poem (which is better) The Damage of Reality. Please note I am aware I ...

Thank you everyone for your honest reviews ^^ My attempt at poetry wasn't as bad as I thought it was. I hope you noticed each time you add something I ...

I can't do it. I can't be that kid anymore. That sick, twisted idiot who just sits back to watch. I don't want to be the one to watch them ...

Okay when I first read this I thought that you were saying the person you were trying to attract didn't like you for being a nice girl. But then I ...

Thank you for the compliment ^^ But I think more people should comment on June >< otherwise I'll lose xD I don't dye my hair though, it's just like that ...

I like sarcasm and humor too ^^ But I also like the characters that are shy and don't know how to show how they feel so they end up sounded ...

removed ^^

I sent you a message that corresponds with this second chance review request. I found your review helpful, but I'd like a another chance in gaining my readers interests. This ...

I'd like a review on this please ^^ I want to see if I improved from october writing to november. Thank you ^^

Oops :oops: . Sorry ! Well do you think you could review chapter 22 of my novel then? If you have time. Sorry again, for making newbie mistakes. I'm trying ...

In the corners of my mind Is the music, I hear the haunting music, Of a string quartet. And when I dance On my toes, I move to the rhythm ...