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Re: Shattered
Shattered Shattered like the pieces of broken glass Accidentally smashed on the wooden floor. Shattered like the pieces of my heart, When you say you won’t see me anymore. Was ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Mines
^^ I really like the imagery here and how you make the reader think. It's one of those poems that you have to read twice to get the whole picture. ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Remember?
To be honest, this was messy. I got lost, I was confused, and I just really did not know what was going on.I also think that the beginning, the words ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: To Lily
June!!! This is really sad. I had a moment of silence... The structure is indeed fabulous ;) Is this based on a true story, or is it fiction? I hope ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: More Than Just Violence ( small portion of it)
The whole poem was themed "violence", so the title of the whole poem was called "More than Just Violence". But I only felt one piece actually seemed pretty decent and ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: The Horizon Awaits
Hello ^^ I'm Shina and I'll be your reviewer today. Um, well to be honest and to put it bluntly, this was pretty boring. It's probably one of those poems ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Paper Faces
My face is a mask, for the world to see. (I like this part ^^ Saying the world only sees your mask rather than your true self) Caught up in ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: Why do you believe/not believe in God?
God is a force, an ultimate being as they say. Many people wonder how we can believe in something we cannot see, touch, smell, hear, or sense basically. How can ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: Is the word retard a "bad word"?
Well, in this day and age, words don't always mean their "proper meaning". There's always slang. For example "shut up" doesn't really mean it literally. It means other things like ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: Have we really gotten smarter?
Well it depends... If you mean smarter by more aware of things and how things work and how to make things more efficient, then yes. And we've also become more ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: Hidden Behind the Pages {Chapter 1}
Thank you for the reviews ^^ I also like the idea of a boy living in a library. But Kade is sort of a weird one xD Mars, if you ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Hidden Behind the Pages {Chapter 1}
No one is going to review 8(
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Hidden Behind the Pages {Chapter 1}
K ade Carlise was an intelligent young man born into a line of humble librarians. In fact his family had such a great passion for reading and books that they ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: A Memoir
I love the twist at the ending here ^^ And this poem actually has a beat and rhymes. The metaphor use is excellent and the poem just speaks to you. ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Awakening
I like the meaning behind the words here. It creates an image and the beginning is very hooking. This is something very believable. But I'm not sure if the title ...
Jan 20, 2009
